"Among the Hidden" by Margaret Peterson Haddix

I chose to review this book because it is included on the 3rd-5th grade list for the 2011-12 Oregon Battle of the Books (OBOB).

Among the Hidden (Shadow Children #1)
Author: Margaret Peterson Haddix
Genre: Science Fiction
Age Level: 9-12 years

SUMMARY
It is the future and there has been a worldwide famine. The Government, in an attempt to control the population, has passed a Population Law that decrees families can have only two children. However, some families have chosen to disobey this law.

Luke Garner is a "third child" who has spent his entire life hiding from the Population Police. Life hasn't been too bad for Luke since his family lives on a farm where there is no one around to see him. But then the government forces the Garners to sell some of their land, and the woods behind their house are torn down to build a subdivision. Luke is forced into the shadows. He quickly becomes lonely and bored.

Then one day he discovers another "third child" living in a nearby house and he summons up the courage to make contact with her. Unlike Luke, Jen has experience of the outside world and she is committed to changing the status of shadow children like herself. Luke has to decide whether or not to join her cause and risk the potentially serious consequences.

CRITIQUE

I was not impressed with this book. The plot and character development were lacking, and the author failed to construct a believable futuristic society. I would describe this book as a "lazy" attempt at science fiction. The author tried to depict a society in which a totalitarian government reigned supreme, but the scenario was inconsistent with reality as well as overly simplistic. Also, considering the amount of time spent on character development, the characters and their relationships were not very compelling. Furthermore, an effort was made to create moments of suspense, but the plot was too predictable to make this very effective.

It is apparent from the writing style that this book was intended for young children. In my opinion, the author both underestimated the ability of children to understand complex issues if fully explained and, at the same time, introduced material that is perhaps unsuitable for young children.

The bottom line is: If you are looking for a good science fiction book for your upper-elementary-aged child, this is NOT one I would recommend. Try The Giver by Lois Lowry or A Wrinkle in Time by Madeleine L'Engle.

RATINGS
Disrespectful/Bad Attitude: Mild
Frightening/Suspenseful: Mild
Profanity: Mild
Sex: None
Substance Use: None 
Mature Themes: Moderate
Violence: Moderate

SPECIFIC CONTENT
Disrespectful/Bad Attitude:
-Luke's brothers call him a "baby" when he doesn't blow out all the candles on his birthday cake.
-Luke's dad and brothers refer to the barons' style of dress as "sissy clothes."
-Luke briefly considers what would happen if one of his older brothers were to die and wonders if that would mean he could come out of hiding. He feels guilty for having these thoughts.
-Luke tells Jen his brothers talk about bras when they are "being dirty."

Frightening/Suspenseful:

-Suspenseful scene when Luke sneaks across the yard over to Jen's house for the first time and isn't sure what he will discover.
-Suspenseful scene when the Population Police show up at Jen's house and Luke has to hide in a closet.

Profanity:
-Words used include idiot, shut up, dopey, and stupid.

Mature Themes:
-Death and grief.
-Mass infanticide.
-Totalitarian government.
-Luke leaves his family, after obtaining a fake ID, in order to find a way to free the shadow children.

Violence:
-Luke's dad "grabbed Luke by the arm and jerked him back a good three feet" when Luke tried to look out the window.
-Jen "knocked him down. Then she pinned him to the floor, his arms twisted behind his back, his face buried in the carpet."
-Jen's dad points a gun at Luke, a gun "meant to kill humans."
-Jen and forty other children are gunned down outside the president's house. "The blood flowed into his rosebushes."
-Luke and Jen's father wrestle for the gun. Luke points it at Mr. Talbot, but eventually allows him to take it and set it on the desk.